Poem about my hopes: Task for AS Language
I hope my life it lasts and last
Where people don't judge me by my past
I hope my life will have a good meaning
So I'm not just sat here living and dreaming.
Where I'm successful in my life
And live a happy future with my wife.
I hope my life will have a good meaning
So I'm not just sat here living and dreaming.
I hope I have a job and become successful
And my life will not be stressful
I hope my life will have a good meaning
So I'm not just sat here living and dreaming.
My family will be by my side
And I'll retire somewhere by the sea side
I hope my life will have good meaning
So I'm not just sat here living and dreaming.
Great work Jordan - you are the only one to attempt a poem. A very clear sense of genre and style. I like the repetition of the last two lines throughout. You have a creative approach to writing which will stand you in good stead for this subject. Well done. You also engage well with the language issues raised in your previous post about Eminem.
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